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Seeing the life differently!

Red

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We stray in the night,
While present
You’re still absent.
Uncertainty takes my hand
We start a tango
You’re watching carefully.
I fall out her hands
And I get closer to you
With flamenco steps.
The clatter of the feelings
Is intense, consuming
Becoming a paso doble.
You act as hefty
Powerful, insane
I chase the red.
Who’s defeated
Who’s the winner
You or me?

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Author: Anna María

I'm just a normal person who enjoyes the life and I try to make a challenge of it every day. I love reading books, I love people around me, I like to study and to discover every day something new. I realized that you can be happy only when you accept that happiness comes from within, I've also learned to accept the life with all her gifts and all the ups and downs.

12 thoughts on “Red

  1. Excellent, very clever and very well thought out. I’ve read it 3 times now and new layers are still being revealed. Thanks for this, I really enjoyed it.
    Mark

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  2. Perfect picture for such a nice piece of writing. Good job!

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  3. Very beautiful. Deep. The to and fro of the dance.
    Peter

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  4. Hi Anna , beautiful concept words and the panting,make the thoughts vivid.Cheers.jalal

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  5. You think and feel in this piece. Makes a good poem.

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