Seeing the life differently!

The potion of immortality


Photo source: Pinterest

Photo source: Pinterest

Undraped souls
Swirled in the morning’s vortex
Gushing hands donating everything –
The equivalent of nothing
For the dormant eye.
Unfettered souls
Inebriated from empty cups
The potion of immortality is hope.


Author: Anna María

I'm just a normal person who enjoyes the life and I try to make a challenge of it every day. I love reading books, I love people around me, I like to study and to discover every day something new. I realized that you can be happy only when you accept that happiness comes from within, I've also learned to accept the life with all her gifts and all the ups and downs.

8 thoughts on “The potion of immortality

  1. A delightfully optimistic piece – nice work Anna.


  2. Been ages since I saw the word “unfettered”. pPwertful images. Have an awesome weekend.


    • I was searching a synonym for the word “unchained” and I felt like “unfettered” is the perfect word for my poem, for what I wanted to transmit.
      I wish you an awesome week-end as well, Raphael! 🙂


  3. Definitely “hope”– especially when thoughts of an afterlife come into play. Peace.


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